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smthngcrprategrl34
a weekago i was your life and you were mine
i was the happiest i can ever remember being
but that was a week ago
and this is a week later
and you are my life but i don't know if i'm still yours
i am more scared then i can ever remember being
there are so many things that i haven't told you
how much i care about you
how i think i'm falling in love with you...
but that was a week later
and this is the week after that
and you have reassured me that everything's fine
that i'm still your life
and i assure you that you are still mine
i am more confused then i can ever remember being
all my friends say that you aren't right for me that i can do so much better
but they don't know you like i do
people are spreading rumors
trying to break us apart
but this is the week after that
and i don't know what's going to happen the week after this
but i hope i find out with you


yeah i know it's kinda badish but leave comments and tell me what you thinK!
emmalie
its..o.k..expressive yes but doesnt have that " kick"..good job though.
smthngcrprategrl34
what can i do to give it "that kick" ?
angel-roh
hmm it didnt confuse me, but nice i think? yo used a lot of "week" >.<;;
smthngcrprategrl34
yea i know i couldn't really think of anything to replace "week" with...
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