you say

you say that i'm special

you say that i'm sweet

but your words go right through me

how can you say those nice things about me

when all of the world

seems to disagree?

you say that i'm pretty

you say that i'm smart

but your words seem to have left me in the dark

how can you not just let me be

when all of the world

seems to have abandoned me?

you say that you love me

you say that you'll stay

but your words are just that

just words

how can you mean all those things you say

when all of the world's so far away?

Has nice transitions...

Your special to me...hehe!

aww thank you!

ohh i like it...thats how i feel sometimes

thank you!

Maybe you shouldn't use the word 'seem' so much.. and the rhyme scheme's off.


But it's nice =P Interesting message.

Oh...i only used seem/s 3 times and it was really intended to rhyme. but that's for the advice

wow that person sure sounds like he/she DOES love you so much that he/she doesnt really care what other people say about you. awww

thanks

how sad .. its pretty plain to me but its pretty good still good job.

Thats really neat. Sweet, simple, carefree, meaningful....yep a 7 out of 10

thank you!