yup,just as the topic said,a few poems i wrote last year that i found. i wrote them off the top of my head,so they arent very god. i rember writing them when i was mad,sad,or depressed. so here it goes:


Why do you act like you dont care?
And treat me so unfair?
Why do you always try to think for me?
Why wont you just let me be?
Everytime you yell I want to crawl
up into a ball and cry
Why do you live your life as a lie?
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You'll never know how I feel because I'm too shy to tell
You'll never never know how I start thinking about you
And feel like I'm in hell
You'll never know how i love your eyes,smile,and hair
God, why cant you give me the strength to tell him, it's just not fair.
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You talk behind my back,
but why cant you just say it to my face?
Are you scared?
is that the case?
I'm tired of being talked about,
tired of getting called names
I'm tired of being the one who always takes the blame
So please,
can we make all of this change?
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so yea,that just a few of them. i wrote more,i've just gotta find them. i know my poems arent that great,so uh....yea. =P

i guess no one has anything to say..... lol

uhmm..Interesting...In your first poem either you should keep the entire thing rhyming. As for the other 2. They're okay but keep writing. You'll get better over time.

i like it.
it seems like you were in the "mood" as you were writing.
I do that. i prefer rhyming poems though.
i love your poems.. hope you're feeling okay.

That one hit the mark with me. Hehe, I can relate to that situation a couple years back.

I like the colloquial language. It's very to the point.

oh, i like how they rhyme. they are really emotional. good writing!

thank you so much everyone! =)