babygrl23
Nov 16 2004, 09:28 PM
People think,
There’s something wrong,
When she doesn’t talk,
Or act along,
When she’s quiet,
When she doesn’t speak her mind,
People worry,
They ask her “Are you o.k.?”
She always says the same thing,
“Yea”,
Maybe there IS something wrong,
Maybe she just wants to be alone,
Maybe she needs to find someone,
Who she can trust
She’s tired of people worrying,
No matter what,
She puts on a happy face,
She doesn’t know what’s wrong,
She just knows she’s never REALLY happy,
But when she pretends to be happy,
She finds it much easier,
To hide from the truth,
That is deep inside of her,
But at times she feels,
As if she could explode,
She wants to talk,
But finds it much easier,
Hiding from the truth.
EXPLO5ION
Nov 16 2004, 09:33 PM
this is good. I know how it feels.
babygrl23
Nov 17 2004, 09:52 PM
Yeah...it sux(feeling like this)
HelloSunshine
Nov 18 2004, 01:15 AM
omg! that's an awesome poem, and yeah, it does suck to feel like that
DoOdOox3
Nov 19 2004, 10:20 AM
yup yup
thatz pretty damn tru
it is easier
nd we all like the easy way out
but then it hurts u in the end tsk tsk
X
babygrl23
Nov 19 2004, 06:42 PM
yeah...it hurts big time...
lonelydevil426
Nov 19 2004, 09:49 PM
i feel like the girl in the poem...
xcesx
Nov 20 2004, 10:49 AM
once again your poem has leaped your feelings allowing you to open up ur emotions...I feel everything ur feeling...it's so insightful and really thought provoking like your other poem...
babygrl23
Nov 21 2004, 01:43 PM
Thank you so much!
swtxcatastrophe
Nov 23 2004, 09:33 PM
Oh my how I can relate. Really good though.
babygrl23
Nov 25 2004, 02:35 PM
Thanks!
x juicy
Nov 27 2004, 10:30 PM
wow that`s really good. and extremely true.. i can totally relate x.x
babygrl23
Nov 28 2004, 12:09 PM
I'm so relieved that I'm not the only one who feels this way...I thought somehthing might be wrong with me...because none of my friends feel this way..
crash57
Nov 29 2004, 03:36 PM
i'm feeling like this right now. thank you for this poem.
_sarcastic_
Nov 29 2004, 06:03 PM
sigh so true, i know how it feels
babygrl23
Nov 29 2004, 10:28 PM
I don't get why my FRIENDS don't understand that I feel this way. Seriously, though, I'm glad I'm not the only one.
dafunnybunny
Nov 29 2004, 10:34 PM
QUOTE(x juicy @ Nov 27 2004, 7:30 PM)
wow that`s really good. and extremely true.. i can totally relate x.x
i can relate too. thats an awesome poem. seriously.
nas
Nov 29 2004, 10:36 PM
I can't understand it either.
Your friends are obviously worrying about you and yet you shun them away, saying you can't trust them. It's YOUR choice that you don't trust them, and then you act like they don't understand you.
What the hell is there to understand?
smthngcrprategrl34
Dec 8 2004, 05:03 PM
i can relate to that. it sucks to feel that way though....awesome job though
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