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babygrl23
People think,
There’s something wrong,
When she doesn’t talk,
Or act along,
When she’s quiet,
When she doesn’t speak her mind,
People worry,
They ask her “Are you o.k.?”
She always says the same thing,
“Yea”,
Maybe there IS something wrong,
Maybe she just wants to be alone,
Maybe she needs to find someone,
Who she can trust

She’s tired of people worrying,
No matter what,
She puts on a happy face,
She doesn’t know what’s wrong,
She just knows she’s never REALLY happy,
But when she pretends to be happy,
She finds it much easier,
To hide from the truth,
That is deep inside of her,
But at times she feels,
As if she could explode,
She wants to talk,
But finds it much easier,
Hiding from the truth.
EXPLO5ION
this is good. I know how it feels. sad.gif
babygrl23
Yeah...it sux(feeling like this)
HelloSunshine
omg! that's an awesome poem, and yeah, it does suck to feel like that pinch.gif
DoOdOox3
yup yup
thatz pretty damn tru
it is easier
nd we all like the easy way out

but then it hurts u in the end tsk tsk
X
babygrl23
yeah...it hurts big time...
lonelydevil426
i feel like the girl in the poem...
xcesx
once again your poem has leaped your feelings allowing you to open up ur emotions...I feel everything ur feeling...it's so insightful and really thought provoking like your other poem...
babygrl23
Thank you so much! happy.gif
swtxcatastrophe
Oh my how I can relate. Really good though.
babygrl23
Thanks! happy.gif
x juicy
wow that`s really good. and extremely true.. i can totally relate x.x
babygrl23
I'm so relieved that I'm not the only one who feels this way...I thought somehthing might be wrong with me...because none of my friends feel this way..
crash57
i'm feeling like this right now. thank you for this poem.
_sarcastic_
sigh so true, i know how it feels
babygrl23
I don't get why my FRIENDS don't understand that I feel this way. Seriously, though, I'm glad I'm not the only one.
dafunnybunny
QUOTE(x juicy @ Nov 27 2004, 7:30 PM)
wow that`s really good. and extremely true.. i can totally relate x.x

i can relate too. thats an awesome poem. seriously.
nas
I can't understand it either.

Your friends are obviously worrying about you and yet you shun them away, saying you can't trust them. It's YOUR choice that you don't trust them, and then you act like they don't understand you.

What the hell is there to understand?
smthngcrprategrl34
i can relate to that. it sucks to feel that way though....awesome job though
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