my pride and my soul all gone and wasted away
the people i once cared for dont care anymore
you ask me why it ended in a way of violence
nothing i can say can heal the wounded and the hurt inside

you lost faith in me and this it how it ends
deprived for what i have done for the sakes of your hapiness
nothing in return you've taken me for granted
looking like a fool under your spell

every trick in the bag you pulled on me
decietful, betrayed and the lost of trust i once had
you finally notice me and all the sh*t you put me through
but its too late to say sorry now

i cannot forgive how you pretended to be my friend
i cannot forgive how you ran me out and put me to end
you ask me why it ended in a violent way
this is what i am, what you see, and what you havent noticed

for all your greed and that haunting look on your face
you've awaken me to come and take your life away
running scared like the damn dog you are
its over its the end kiss your ass good bye

Guessing you're going through a rough time or something. But anyways, it's good, but I can't feel it. It seems like you wrote this w/o putting a little bit of yourself in it. Well that's just my opinion.

eacto mundo this is random off my head

Oh, I see, because most of the stuff I write are kinda based on my life and whatnot.




~Nguyen