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Foolish Heart
This was suppose to be in Spanish for my homework, but here's the english version.

Those brown deep pools
Are eyes of yours
I could get lost
If I could stare
The promises you say
Eyes can tell what is broken
The truth unfolds
The lies I bury
A beauty of a rose
It is emerging from the scenery
This rose still undiscovered
The meaning of it inside you
Open your eyes
Do you see it?
It is love, waiting
Slowly the rose darkens
Painfully, the tears fall
It is too late
With one last dove
The night covered in shadows
I am sorry, my love
TheSilenceInDiction
Not bad.
It'd be beautiful in Spanish.
A little confused of the line
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With one last dove
goofipinay
yea...
with one last dove
it doesnt seem to fit in much...
Foolish Heart
Oh Im sorry about that part, I had to make the spanish version rhyme and I was trying to find some word to atleast make it sound okay in Spanish version, lol.
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