No matter how far apart
You’ll always be in heart
But I want be able to cuddle with you all night
Cause just being with you takes me to new heights

Being with you gives me much ecstasy
I hope you’ll change your mind and stay with me
Don’t ever go; stay by my side
If you do go; my feelings will for you bide

Why are you so hesitant to answer me
Don't you understand; I want you to stay my little bumblebee
Again with they silence…I must ask why
Is this your way of saying good-bye…?

The bumblebee part is just an inside joke..don't ask about it.

aaw... that's sad

You really think my poem is sad?

Hrm, maybe you should keep working on this one.
Seems like you just threw in any line in order to keep the rhyme going.

To tell you the truth, I wasn't feelin` this poem at all. It does seemed forced, I just haven't been very inspired lately. This was my least favorite one that I made.



~Nguyen