the stars so high, the stars so bright
you're the only one in my life that makes things right
if id ever lose you, my whole world would end
it'll be nothing anymore but just friends

i would miss those times when we were together
how we were close just as sister and brother
id remember the smiles you'd have on your face
memories torn inside me, your love cant be replaced

ill always be there for you like i was from the start
even if you gave your love to another mans heart
seeing you smile again puts the warmness on my soul
but these feelings i have for you, i cant control

whenever i see the both of you together holding hands
i picture me and you, but i have to be a man and understand
i have to let you go and all these feelings for you
no matter how much it'll hurt me this is the last thing to do

i still dream of you everyday
but now its over, i slowly drift away

Odd transition with the past tense, 'what-if', and present.
Kinda confusing what the situation is.
Pretty good though.

hmm ic what you mean man thnx uhh lets see proof reading time
what i mean is well lets see two people in love.. but then after the first part im flashing forward back and forth so yeah its basically saying what'd a person would do if that someone isnt there anymore

x33333

PS--is it okay and put some of it on my AIM profile? It's a really good poem for this point in my life. Just wanna get the okay from you first.

Cute poem, I love it! xD

yeh shure why not im glad someone wants to post it so gyea itd koo with me

ooo i like very much...i didnt like the rhyming at first but it flows pretty well with the poem :]

Old school stuff here. I use to be a good writer like 2-3 years ago, I wrote every day. but now it seems ive lost it.