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Heathasm
women are evil, sensitive, hypocritcal cute little bastards
thats all i have to say to introduce this poem laugh.gif



The scar on my waist leads you around
In existential maneuvers

I say I’m not afraid
To bleed all over you

I tell you, now with my hand clasped over your mouth,
How I gave up half my life for us
And now I bleed from being torn

So, taste my tear-stained lips
As I hum,
Giving you a pleasant tingle
But maybe those are moans of agony
Whatever, you have to deal now
someflipguy
I agree! happy.gif
TheSilenceInDiction
I'm getting the hint of betrayal from this poem.
I like the image you put out. Good job.
dreamerOi
yes we are evil. anyways your poems always engrosses me. i like it.
tooeffingcrazy
your poems suck. i hate it.

just kidding biggrin.gif so bloody and violent. I LOVE IT.
LadyXTor
Wow, I like it! Very detailed and creative, it sets images in your mind. Keep the good work!
Heathasm
wow thanks alot guys ^-^ your comments mean alot
QUOTE
your poems suck. i hate it.
just kidding  so bloody and violent. I LOVE IT.

mhmmm _dry.gif i know what your subconscious is thinking noww
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