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mony0407
this just randomely came out of my head [lol] obviously i dont usually write poems, or much of anything.. hince it not being very good. dont say anything mean, that'd be much appreciated.

-Live To Bleed-

she shot her hands into the sky
begged aloud 'lord let me die'
dripping blood off her wrists
landed lightly on her lips
tears ran fast down her cheek
she felt so cold, utterly weak
looked to the left then to the ground
grabbed the knife without a sound
she cried once more, a final pleed
'God help me please, i live to bleed'

©-Me
Heathasm
whoa...that was very powerful..i had the whole image in my head
sweetxsimplicity
Yeah, it was very powerful. You could imagine everything almost perfectly.
dispn0ygonekrazy
powerful stuff i agree
TheSilenceInDiction
Short and drives the point straight on through...well done.
I think this is one of the first poems here that has ever mentioned the Lord/God.
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