written towards a group of people i was rather upset with when i wrote this...still an older piece, from 2 years-ish ago. constructive criticism is appreciated, thank you.

What's Wrong.
by stephinika

What’s wrong with you people?
Why do you care?
Where do you get these ideas?
Who do you think you are?
When will it stop?

Let me tell you something
It’s none of your business
And you are all wrong
You keep thinking things that are far from the truth
All I ask is you leave me alone
And quit telling me what I feel
They are my emotions
I control them
You do not know how I am
And you do not know who I truly am
So stop those false accusations of me
And let me tell the truth
To all of those people
With fake images of who I am in their minds

You are all wrong
You shouldn’t care
No matter where these ideas come from
You are all yourselves as I am me so leave me alone
And it should never have started.

Very direct poem, with raw and honest expression.
I enjoyed how you went back to the first stanza at the end - it tied up pretty well.
Well sorted with a clear message.

hmm...reads a bit funny, but other than good stuff