having eyes as bright as the sky
your spirit so strong and a soul thats free
the smile on your face is as glamorous as the sea
just to hold you so tight, id give everything up

ill throw away everything i have just to be with you
to prove to you our love is more important than aything else
id be that man to cheer you up everytime you frown
ill be the one to pick you up everytime you fall

im not like everyone else thats just comes and go
i wont leave u stranded or ever leave your side
ill show you the kind of love u want and deserve
wheres its just me and you holding hands under the starlit sky

a place where nothing is wrong and every thing is right id do whatever i can
ill promise everything to you, the love and desire if i can just be your man

feeling down and under today so heres my lito poem hope you like

That's good pretty straight forward. Oh and I hope you cheer up to man.

heheh thnx man

i like how the poem begins :] i think this is one of your better love poems, too

thnx !! yeh im glad im outta of rhyming.. i think u can express your self more with words that doesnt rhyme and your also not struggling to find a word to rhyme wuth next ooh and i think this is the only piece i think u actually like than my others lol thnx