dispn0ygonekrazy
Oct 11 2004, 10:04 PM
i sit here and close my eyes
thinking of you till i start to cry
i remember every single word that broke us apart
every hurtful thing that tore your heart
i live in this world where i can only regret
as it haunts me in my mind never to forget
you meant more to me than life it self
my heart was only for you and no one else
you were the one that made everything shine
i just cant believe you were once mine
im feeling in a love kinda mood lol
Ekay
Oct 11 2004, 10:13 PM
hahah nice mang...I'm usually feelin the "lovely" mood =]
rainnydaiis
Oct 11 2004, 10:21 PM
dang mike u love writing love stuff =P hehe i feel u.. but i try new stuff
dispn0ygonekrazy
Oct 12 2004, 08:45 AM
hahah i know i am trying new things on days i feel a different mood thats it geez my criticism... lol j/p
Bridget_rules_4eva
Oct 10 2005, 08:15 AM
i like the poem i cant reall think of anything tom make it better...
azn_at_heart
Oct 10 2005, 09:51 PM
good poem
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