im on my own and finally free
walking a path of a lonesome road
nothing to bring but my only dream
to find my answer along this path i reign

no more holding back time to let go
all these harmful feelings that i kept in me
whom put me in a losfer of words
and brought me this way only to see

ive missed out all the important things in life
so many years wasted i finally open my eyes
to a life of a better day and hope to see
for once in my life im finally free

i think this is good XD

yeah i liked it good job

Hey, not bad...Good job.

Ah, the thresholds we cross.

are you trying to rhyme???? if not ... i like it!! ^___^