You're my True Love
It's as if you came from above
You're the only one with the keys to my heart
I can't stand it when we're apart

You're the one that lights up my day
Whenever I see you smile my way
You're the one love of my life, you're my boo
And soon my Love for you grew

And as you see
My joy and glee
Revolves around you
Is this true for you too?


This poem took me 2 hours to rhyme...

wow 2 hours umm nice job though but 2 hours WHOAH heheh if u stick here long enough youd be writing poems in seconds

2 hours?! Sheezus.

Haha, 'Boo'...I can't believe you actually used that. Erg, Nig words shuck.

Another poem that can pull off as a song.

i say good job but 2 hours.. goodness

Well it took me a while to think of a word that rhymes with life. It was strife, wife, and knife. Those didn't seem to fit with the kind of poem I was making. So I had to think of another word. Basically I got stuck with rhyming life.

Then don't rhyme at all.

Why struggle so hard? It's your writing, why need to follow any guidelines but your own? Unless you're bent for rhymes.

rhyming life lol i get that too im stuck with strife wife and knife and if u read my other poems posted here i used it like this

You're the one love of my life
without you itd hurt like i was cut by a knife

u see lol spend more time here and learn

lol but I wanted something to sound good. Something with love. I didn't see how knife could fit into this.


::edit:: Well I kno it's my writing but I like how rhyming makes it flow. So that's why i spent a while on this one.

If you can't find a rhyme for a word, Then just try and work your way around it. Change the first word (In this case, 'life') or whole sentence completely. I'm sure there are other alternatives that carry the same message/meaning. Also, there are synonyms out there, people.

You've got a point..I guess I was stressin on trying to find rhymes I didn't really think about that option.

Hey, no prob, we do it all the time, right?

Well, glad that I helped.

-Joe

Yeah..Thanks for the help tho man. I really appriciate it.

Nice poem. Jez remember not everything has to rhyme :] ... just write frmo your heart.

i try not to use rhymes anymore.. seems more like free write that way..

hehehe. Thanks for the input. I have written ones that don't rhyme but I didn't really like those. So I just started to try and rhyme.

yeah i try not to rhyme too but still a habit in me

Hey, whatever works for you. It's your writing, you should be comfortable with it.