Uh...first one posted here..not great but eh


from the ones iv lost
to the ones iv gained
you have kept me strong
all the way.

your love has sustained me
for the timeless years
that youve loved me
ill remember i swear

this is the last time
youll hear my voice
please forgive me
this is my choice

nice i like the tone to it but i say you make a little slight change to the line where it says ill remenber i swear...