im here to reveal this dark side of me
something terrible, somethig u dont want to see
its tooken over me, over my soul
feeling helpless i have no control
im a monster a horrible beast
i invite u to come to my feast
to feed on your hatred towards me
more and more this is what im going to be
something that everyone hates
a dark side u can relate

wOOt wOOt!! i found my darkside in me!!

OOOooooOOOohhh eerie....cool i like it esp the personifcation of the darkness....

Erm..There wasn't any personification. I think you have it mixed up or something.



Erm, Mike, the word is 'taken.' Hope that was just a typo.

Judging from this poem and that last one, you have quite a bit inside of you when it comes to how you present yourself and self-perception. Which is good - embrace it and keep writing more and more as you continue to question and discover it.

yeah i guess im improving eh... i was thinking of the word taken but i couldnt choose between tooken and taken i got lost there lol