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dispn0ygonekrazy
i look in the mirror and see a reflection of me
giving me thoughts i didnt want to see
im left in sorrow with nothing to gain
remembering those words that gave me this pain
everynight u haunt me in my dreams
that terrible feeling that makes me run and scream
yur that thing that brings chaos in my life
yur the one that cuts my world like a knife
now im scared with nothing to do
except these thoughts in my head that reminds me of u

ummm yeah something random
slurp
wow, i feel like i can relate to your poem, feels like words right out my mouth. anyway, nicely written flowers.gif
dispn0ygonekrazy
thnx yay
TheSilenceInDiction
Well, you're right, it's not a love poem. laugh.gif

Anyway, not bad...I like the mysterious outside element...In a lot of cases, people like to debate whether or not the person is truly someone else, or the writer is caught in conflict with him/herself.

BTW, you'll want to double check your sig, dude. rolleyes.gif
dispn0ygonekrazy
yeh i mispell things lol
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