we both stare at the moonlit sky
thinking of you i start to cry
i walk alone in this pouring rain
feeling so hurt, feeling so much pain
i thought of that time when i held u so tight
whispering these words evrything will be alright
the look on our face made everything okay
just one smile u took my heart away
day by day im still living in a past
a past i once had that never did last
everyday im lost with nothing to do
but a broke down heart thats always loving you

yay hope u like

awWww.. cute poem =]..but depressin..hmm

lol i dunno about depressin but when i wrote it to me i feel depressed

lol it sounds depressin to me.. most of my poems are depressing in in relationship kinda thing.. lol prolly cause when i write..it about my life..

lol something in common same here i write poems about my life and relate to it

you know what we should making a writing family =P

beacuse we here all write about love and life =P

a writing family lol good idea SAM!! props to u im thinking of a poem writing community and some other stuff

That's a nice poem.
Really nice, actually.
Made me somewhat sad, actually to think about it. v.v
Oh, well.
Very nice job. =]

Some of it doesn't make sense...
you both stare at the moonlit sky thinking of her makes you cry and then the next minute you're alone... well at the beginning you said you were together staring at the moonlit sky, well that's what i inferred from the " we both stare at the moonlit sky"

lol yeh that one was a quickie but i still like it

tahts why its called free write poems =P

yh u feel me sam geez lol

that is such a sweet peom!!! so sad... but romantic.

*singsong*
mike is depreeeeesed!

i like it you can feel all of the emotions that u were fellings. but i think you could add alittle more.. rather than that.. i love it=]
i also write stuff like that