why do i choke at the sight of ur name
why do i feel like it isnt the same
why do i fall and start to cry
who do i constantly ask myself why
why do i drop down and beg on my knees
to find the answer what u didnt see
that there was so many words that i didnt say
to save the love before u died away

a short one lol

Ooo again another good one =P

yea..i know the feeling

awwwwwwwww. that was SOOOOOOO SAD!!!!! omg i love it!!!!!!it makes me wanna cry!!!!

heheh thnx

this poem is pretty bad
the repetition is unoriginal and "why" is overused-not a good choice
there's no punctuation...the last line does not even make sense, you can make sense of it, but it sounds like some thing a 7 yr old would say
misspelled words...and its boring

i suggest reading over your work. not just after you finish it, wait a few hours or a day then re-read it and make the necessary changes...i see good inspiration but a quickie job lol

er...this is just a critique so dont get offended

Heathasm... Now you know... "why" no more love poems should be written.

well srry if it didnt meet your standards =/

that's such a sweet and cute poem!!