babygrl23
Sep 15 2004, 08:55 PM
When the road ahead looks dark and scary,
Do not fear, for the only thing to fear is fear itself,
And I will be by your side the whole way.
Do not fear that I will leave you stranded,
Alone and confused,
As others did to me.
I will follow you on the path of life,
And guide you as much as I can,
For I am your friend.
When we turn to each other and laugh,
Laugh for no reason,
You KNOW that I am your friend.
We may have differences,
But, "do not doubt our friendship," as you said to me,
I will always be here.
When the road ahead looks dark and scary,
And we are lost and don't know what to do,
Let's just turn to each other, laugh and smile, that's all we have to do.
We will go through everything together,
We will survive,
No matter what may lie ahead!
babygrl23
Sep 16 2004, 05:28 PM
ok, I know this is spamming...but come on! Somebody must have SOME comments.
rainnydaiis
Sep 16 2004, 05:30 PM
I like your topic friendship and just wait people will get to it sooner or later =P
my poems have no comments ad all and i don't mind =P
babygrl23
Sep 16 2004, 06:23 PM
QUOTE(rainnydaiis @ Sep 16 2004, 5:30 PM)
I like your topic friendship and just wait people will get to it sooner or later =P
my poems have no comments ad all and i don't mind =P
thank you!
rainnydaiis
Sep 16 2004, 06:24 PM
no Problemo =P
i love people who write i find it sexy lolz!
babygrl23
Sep 16 2004, 07:52 PM
QUOTE(rainnydaiis @ Sep 16 2004, 6:24 PM)
no Problemo =P
i love people who write i find it sexy lolz!
lol
Heathasm
Sep 17 2004, 01:27 PM
it's pretty good...i dont like the repetativeness, flow, or word choice

but the topic is pretty compassionate and that makes it interesting on it's own
dispn0ygonekrazy
Sep 25 2004, 01:10 PM
aww looks like im a little late lol good poem!!!!