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babygrl23
The last time I saw him,
This moment I will never forget,
When he walked into the bright light,
And left me there to sit.

I had never thought about life without him,
Until he could no longer hold me,
In the end I cried as hard as I could,
But I was still upset.

I then saw him in a dream,
He said he was sorry he had to leave me,
But he had to go sometime,
He only wished it would have been when I was older.

He said he was sorry he couldn't watch me grow up,
He would have wanted to,
I know he would be so proud,
And I too wish he could see me.

He made my four years great ones,
Although I can't explain why,
But not only was he my great grandfather,
He was my best friend.
babygrl23
ok, I know this is spamming...but come on! Somebody must have SOME comments
Heathasm
i like this one alot! happy.gif good job
LatinaLady
you just gotta be patient, but i love it. its so sweet. it reminds me of my mom =)
babygrl23
Yeah, I'm not very patient...lol. What happened to your mom, if you dont mind me asking.
dispn0ygonekrazy
awww im late on this one too geez lol ay i like ur poems very touching TWO THUMBS UP
babygrl23
thanks! =)
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