me and alla mi friends have this book
that we write poems in
and id like to share one
that mi friend aj wrote, for his girlfriend

"i wrote your name in the sky
the wind washed it away
i wrote yur name at the ocean
and the water washed it away
i wrote yur name in mi heart
and foreer it will stay"

yeah i thought it was so kute when he wrote it
so yeah i had to share it

damn that is cute hehehe

how cute

thats kyoooote*
but ive seen it posted on other websites, but still veryy cute

Yeah, um... That little poem is very common...

Your friend needs originality.

It's nice that she actually remembered it, though... I give her a prop for that...

Err..
*koff* Sorry, but I really don't think it's that original.
Cute, sure.
Original, no.
It's nice.. maybe she should change it a bit?
Whatever.
It's her writing. >_>

er..

a) it seems too girly for a guy
b) he didn't write it, I've seeen that a lot.

yeah ive heard it a few times, but overall is a cute poem