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razbus
Done. by razbus

Well, was it love?
I... guess i thought it was.

but i was wrong,
just a matter of time before things fell apart,
didn't take very long,
just the thought of you, just the thought of you,
...and now you're gone.

Well, now that i made it this far?
I...live on without my heart.

but some say its better,
to have love and lost, but well,
i say its better, to have never loved at all,
none of this was my idea,
it's not my call.

It's not my choice in this and you know it's not,
so don't act innocent, or play it off.

I played the fool but I'm done. (with you)
I played the fool but I'm done. (with you)

I'm through.
SarahxJoy
Very truthful, and I can relate. Is this intended to be a song? I can see it work either way, as a song..or a poem. Very good.
davexd
nice
xosteffanator
QUOTE(tainted_angel @ Sep 12 2004, 1:03 AM)
Very truthful, and I can relate. Is this intended to be a song? I can see it work either way, as a song..or a poem. Very good.
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Yes, I could imagine it as a song. That was pretty good, my language arts teacher would've loved it _smile.gif
WHOngos144
that's good
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