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Devastation
There you are
beatuiful and sweet
its funny how
my love you still cant beat

even when we broke up
i still loved you
no matter what
i always loved the true you

through the tought times
and our happy days
it had to come to this
i dont have anything to say

we were perfect
everything in sync
we broke up so fast
didnt have time to blink

i can see why we broke up
there was nothing good about me
it was just andrew
plain as can be.

its sad to have to come to an end
we coulda became something great
guess you didnt love me
thats one thing i hate

dont worry i'll get over you
my heart is still in some pain
the fact that i even loved you
i take that in vain.

This is the end of me and you
no more love no more hate
from this day foward
this is the end of "our" fate
sporadic
Wow, is this from an experience?

I'm sorry to hear about it v.v

Good poem, though..
Devastation
QUOTE(Thradrien_Blake @ Aug 24 2004, 4:53 PM)
Wow, is this from an experience?

I'm sorry to hear about it v.v

Good poem, though..

oh no, lol not from an experience one of my closet friends recently had a horrible relationship so i took it from his perspectiveand wrote this poem : )
sporadic
But it's so sad :(
Devastation
yes i know, i have many emotions to share and enough for other people to borrow
sporadic
Well, you're just an emotional guy ^_^

<333
Devastation
not THAT emotional, i really only use my emotions for poetry. lmfao i dont cry for EVERYTHIONG.
sporadic
You don't??

*starts crying*

:P
Devastation
baby! i cry over some things, but not like everyTHING YOU SAY~
sporadic
yeah yeah I get it :P
angel-roh
you're topic should've be "i loved you" cause in the end ur saying no more love and no more hate...just go in a separate ways-_-;; so yeah heh but i'll give u 9.8/10^^;
slurp
QUOTE(anqel_r0h @ Aug 25 2004, 12:19 AM)
you're topic should've be "i loved you" cause in the end ur saying no more love and no more hate...just go in a separate ways-_-;; so yeah heh but i'll give u 9.8/10^^;

yeah i dont think your topic title matched the poem but nicely written thumbsup.gif
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