tell me wut you think of this poem thnx!


I knelt to pray but not for long,
I had too much to do. 
I had to hurry and get to work for bills would soon be due.
So I knelt and said a hurried prayer,
And jumped up off my knees.
My Christian duty was now done
My soul could rest at ease.
All day long I had no time
To spread a word of cheer.
No time to speak of Christ to friends,
They'd laugh at me I'd fear.
No time, no time, too much to do, That was my constant cry, 
No time to give to souls in need
But at last the time, the time to die.

thats really good!


but you might wanna put this in writing section next time

This should be in Interests

It's nice!, but please post your next poems/stories in writing.

its ok. there was some parts i didnt' get. good job, though

It's nice!, but please post your next poems/stories in writing.


woops sry!

hmm...interesting. it's pretty good.

Yeah, there are some parts I don't get. Basically, it's like this. I don't like poetry. Analyzing it and argh. >.< Lol, but your poem is good. It's better than anything I can write.

yes, this is the 5th time i have heard of this poem, can you say copy and paste?