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me_myself_andi2003
my poem is gonna be a short one....


i thought you were the one but i guess i was wrong
i loved u with my heart but u didnt love me at all
i thought we were lovers like all of them there
but all u could say was "dont touch my hair!"
despite all the bickering, i still love you so
please dont ever leave me as i need u so
if you hate me that much u might as well kill me
because without you in my life im nothing but an ant


i noe its supposed to have stanzas and stuff but i was lazy... this is just a short one... it was impromptu too!!!
lhuvhurts
thats really good
i like that
sweetdreamsx3
Lol, you write better poems that I do when I was 14. >.< I suck at rhyming. It amazes me how people can come up with words easily.
me_myself_andi2003
well according to iq tests i have a good intelectual understanding.... means im good at words... so yeah its easy for me!!


and thanx! biggrin.gif
sugarcubes
nice
but y an ant?
not a smant?
not a pant?
not a not?
not a ... umm ran out
me_myself_andi2003
QUOTE(sugarcubes @ Aug 24 2004, 5:44 PM)
nice
but y an ant?
not a smant?
not a pant?
not a not?
not a ... umm ran out

LOL.... funny! hahahahahahaha.... cuz i dun wanna me smants or pants tongue.gif
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