read this poem that i wrote and tell me if it is good or even if it makes sense

my heart is missing so much,
some of which i cannot find,
but seeing what is lost,
turns my heart blind..
what goes from a glance in the mirror,
turns into a stare,
looking deep inside this pain,
wondering if its caution or despair..
questioning my feelings in relationships,
why they quickly end,
was my heart ever broken?
or is it taking a lifetime to mend?..

thanks!

someone move it to writing..

and its good. :]

its good. moved.

Nice poem. =-]

mm gewd poem props lol

this poem deserves to be published.

aww you guys make me feel speshul

i agree this poem is realli gud i like it
u shud extend it n make it longer ya kno?

love ur poem... did u just break up? the poem is like.... sad