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delightfullyinsane
just again do i feel touch
do i feel my heart beat again
even though crimson sin runs rampid
along these tiled floors of secrets and shame
i question my entirety
and see that this sin had drenched my perception
as i breathe my last breath
i smile a little inside
Devastation
QUOTE(delightfullyinsane @ Aug 13 2004, 9:03 PM)
just again do i feel touch
do i feel my heart beat again
even though crimson sin runs rampid
along these tiled floors of secrets and shame
i question my entirety
and see that this sin had drenched my perception
as i breathe my last breath
i smile a little inside

nice emotion, just maybe alittle too much? lol
ErikMichaelscheese
QUOTE(delightfullyinsane @ Aug 13 2004, 10:03 PM)
just again do i feel touch
do i feel my heart beat again
even though crimson sin runs rampid
along these tiled floors of secrets and shame
i question my entirety
and see that this sin had drenched my perception
as i breathe my last breath
i smile a little inside

I think its a good poem...very interesting also very sad.
F1R3B4T
very good poem. it almost feels like the author is reincarnated or sumfin
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