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Foolish Heart
So yeah, here's a poem I wrote while listening to the song "Meant To Live". I don't see the connection with my poem and the song. But somehow I came up with the poem while listening to the song. So here you go; please comment:

Disturbed Innocence, by Me

Sometimes the world goes crazy
Or is it just me?
Falling into nothingness
Just above the ground
Losing control of whatever is around
Hurt and fear I have to face
Tears pouring without grace
Watching reality, hoping it’s just an illusion
Don’t ruin my childhood imaginations
With these innocent eyes of mine
Already had enough of the cruel reality
Telling my mind that all those were just dreams
Please, walk away, before you hear my screams
tyedyefroggy
oooo I like it. Nice Job!
Foolish Heart
QUOTE(tyedyefroggy @ Aug 11 2004, 10:27 PM)
oooo I like it. Nice Job!

THANKS!
F1R3B4T
thats a great poem. good job!
NiKECHiQ
i like it ! good job ! wink.gif
Foolish Heart
Thanks you guys!!
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