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ryfitaDF
sooooo many things telling me about how bad bush is. why not do somthign about it? what do i do best? i wrote an anti-bush song! it's EFFin OI! if you don't like it that's fine and if you do like it be sure to tell me! happy.gif ! here it is.

BANE OF OUR NATION
So many people dying for no reason
So many politics committing treason
So many dollars taken away from the needy
For heat seeking missiles: exterminate machinery

Commander in chief took Iraq under fire
We’re told it’s for freedom, we know for empire
Sacrifice our future for a non-existant gain
The senior: the warlock, the offspring: the bane

So many people dying for no reason
So many politics committing treason
So many dollars taken away from the needy
For heat seeking missiles: exterminate machinery
So many children still being left behind
So many workingmen being robbed blind
So many bullets producing such fear
So tell me who is the real terrorist here?

Election speech lies and denying the truth
Now he’s attempting to burgle our youth
The first step to becoming totalitarian
Is not reading but signing the patriot act
“Despicable acts of terror”? Despicable errors!
Recruiting the people by using their prayers
G dubya: warmonger. He’s ready to kill
And like Herbert Hoover we’re building bushvilles

So many soldiers that aren’t coming back
To bring liberty to the country Iraq
So much for building a democracy
When all that we’re after is sweet Texas tea
We know that Iraq has some WMDs
What’s there left to prove? We have the receipt
I guess offensive is how we defend
Just so al-Quida can do it again

Too many people dying for no reason
Too many politics committing treason
Too many dollars not being used for feeding
Too many dollars in the pockets of the greedy
Too much potential dead on the front line
Too many workingmen being robbed blind
Too many corpses and too many coffins
George W. Bush GET THE F*** OUT OF OFFICE!
Luster Soldier
That's just awesome, and very true of what's going on right now. I really like the last line laugh.gif
F1R3B4T
last line BOMBS.
ryfitaDF
QUOTE(F1R3B4T @ Aug 11 2004, 2:13 AM)
last line BOMBS.

come again?
ryfitaDF
more people read me!
Sa-Chan
*crying* Everytime I think I'm getting better at writing, you blow me away so utterly and completely. You are such an amazing writer. *sniffles*
CrackedRearView
Actually the rhymes reach way too far, and half of them make half-assed sense just to rhyme, for example:

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Too many dollars not being used for feeding
Too many dollars in the pockets of the greedy
ryfitaDF
QUOTE(CrackedRearView @ Aug 12 2004, 8:30 PM)
Actually the rhymes reach way too far, and half of them make half-assed sense just to rhyme, for example:

i know. i didn't like that one very much, but i wanted to switch the chorus up a little bit.


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*crying* Everytime I think I'm getting better at writing, you blow me away so utterly and completely. You are such an amazing writer. *sniffles*


don't even worry! you're doing great! and you are getting better. just chill



i forgot to say anything about him hating homosexuals and him trying to forbay abortions. oh well.
black_cloud10
very awesome ^_^
angel-roh
i think it's ok... hehe i mean i hate bush too........ and wow john...u wana be famous someday, huh? dammn a music director should read ur lyrics cause it's reallie good^^;; hmm i never hear u sing tho... oo have u ever record any of ur songs yet that ppls can hear too?^^
ErikMichaelscheese
good song! very cool.
marfmallow
Finally someone smart.. lol.. damn you read my mind. Love the last line too. Great thing u wrote there. happy.gif

- The Lee
inquisitive_
That is some powerful stuff. I love the last line. wink.gif
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