Um, I wrote this a while ago. 'Posted it on my xanga, and so I guess I'll post it here. Tell me what you think.

No Longer Living
I let those words just pass me by
Turn around and walk away
Blinking away these tears, before I cry

I guess I've never been good enough
Never been much of a friend
I guess I just can't meet up with your standards
And so now, I guess this is the end

I'll let you live your life
As God intended it to be
Because now I know that your life
Should have never crossed paths with me

It feels as if everything around me is no longer alive
And now I can recall, that one time when they said
That pain can never hurt
When everyone around you is dead

I'll never regret that time
When I met you, on that one day
But the one thing I'll always regret
Is when I couldn't keep you around to stay

o0o, thats pretty good, me likes

oooh, i lyk it

awwwwww...its so sad... Great job on it none the less

wh0a... i lyk dat

so flawless, very neat and to the point, i feel the emotion, your poetry pieces so far are great. keep it up.

its good =) very meaningful



i especially like

"I'll never regret that time
When I met you, on that one day
But the one thing I'll always regret
Is when I couldn't keep you around to stay "

Wow, beautifully written. Me loves this! Why is the first stanza only 3 lines?
I love these lines:

'Because now I know that your life
Should have never crossed paths with me'

But it would make more sense if you said:

'Because now I know that you
Should have never crossed paths with me'

Great job!

I like it..
Its sad though..

does that means .. she died ?

greeeeeeat job.

great job!