Okay, if you've read part of my book Flashbacks then you know I really like to write. So I'm almost done with Flashbacks (it's 215 pages now) so I'm thinking of a new story. I want to know what you'd rather read...(NOTE: both of these plots are basically based on a true story)
Story #1-
A highschool girl and her softball coach have an affair with each other. They're convinced that it's love, but trouble starts when somone finds out.
That story is going to be 1st person perspective (i.e. I did this, I did that, I am going to, etc.)
Story #2- A beautiful 18yr old girl works at a local Hooters in L.A. After she agrees to a date with one of her usual customers, he goes crazy when she dumps him and decides to kidnap her. For days, he keeps her in a cellar- which is dark and damp- torturing her.
That story is going to be 3rd person perspective (i.e. She went over there, She thought to herself, She smiled, etc.)
So what do you guys think?
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QUOTE(diezelbabygrl_xoxo @ Aug 5 2004, 1:36 PM)
Okay, if you've read part of my book Flashbacks then you know I really like to write. So I'm almost done with Flashbacks (it's 215 pages now) so I'm thinking of a new story. I want to know what you'd rather read...(NOTE: both of these plots are basically based on a true story)
Story #1-
A highschool girl and her softball coach have an affair with each other. They're convinced that it's love, but trouble starts when somone finds out.
That story is going to be 1st person perspective (i.e. I did this, I did that, I am going to, etc.)
Story #2- A beautiful 18yr old girl works at a local Hooters in L.A. After she agrees to a date with one of her usual customers, he goes crazy when she dumps him and decides to kidnap her. For days, he keeps her in a cellar- which is dark and damp- torturing her.
That story is going to be 3rd person perspective (i.e. She went over there, She thought to herself, She smiled, etc.)
So what do you guys think?
Story #1-
A highschool girl and her softball coach have an affair with each other. They're convinced that it's love, but trouble starts when somone finds out.
That story is going to be 1st person perspective (i.e. I did this, I did that, I am going to, etc.)
Story #2- A beautiful 18yr old girl works at a local Hooters in L.A. After she agrees to a date with one of her usual customers, he goes crazy when she dumps him and decides to kidnap her. For days, he keeps her in a cellar- which is dark and damp- torturing her.
That story is going to be 3rd person perspective (i.e. She went over there, She thought to herself, She smiled, etc.)
So what do you guys think?
hmm i'd read both.
But anyway, write the first one because that one sounds more funny.
ooo the second one sounds very sadistic and interesting.
the 2nd one is much more interesting and ther can be a lot of suspence points in it
if u haf time, cud u post like 2 paragraphs on CB? i'm sure we'd all realli appreciate!
if u haf time, cud u post like 2 paragraphs on CB? i'm sure we'd all realli appreciate!
i would personally read the second story, but they both sound good. 
The second one sounds more interesting and intense. I like the first one 2 tho.
QUOTE(F1R3B4T @ Aug 7 2004, 9:28 PM)
the 2nd one is much more interesting and ther can be a lot of suspence points in it
if u haf time, cud u post like 2 paragraphs on CB? i'm sure we'd all realli appreciate!
if u haf time, cud u post like 2 paragraphs on CB? i'm sure we'd all realli appreciate!i'll try, but it might be a while. first i have 2 write a manuscript for flashbacks and send it out 2 little, brown&co.
but if i have tha time, i will
I'd rather read the first one, I think..
Good luck on this, though.
Good luck on this, though.
Hm, I voted for the second. It's seems more suspenseful and thrilling..in a sense. 
My current story plot. Read this!!
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I like story 1 better. The 2nd one reminds me of...erm. Bondage and Rape. Yea. 
yea, first one would be better. second one... is like a soap opera. actually... it could be like... NC-17 
so im sticking with number 1.
so im sticking with number 1.
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