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inthemudhole
Okay. I wrote this poem for a poetry slam in school this year.. I got chosen to read mine at the slam. I came in 2nd place. So, yeah. This poem kinda sucks..

"You Don't Know Me"

I am not who you think I am,
I'm not one of you, I'm not one of them.

Why do you judge me? and
Why do you label me?

You just don't understand me,
You don't know the real me.

I doubt you know me for real,
and you absolutely don't know how I feel

You think I have no problems,
but that is where you are wrong.

As I sit here...alone..all alone..,
I'm thinking about you, and only you.

I think about you day and night,
I bet you didn't realize that.

I don't know how I got this way,
it's most likely because of you.

I sure hope you realize,
that I'm not who you think I am.

You don't know me.
sheepy
wow very unique , like the message too!
yeseulx3
i like this _smile.gif

nice job
F1R3B4T
hey, i like that poem! lol good job! u deserved that prize for poetry slam!!
sweetdreamsx3
Awesome!!! Do you mind if I post this in my xanga? lol I found two good poems so far. :D
slurp
wow, that poem relates to how i feel right now..nice poem
inthemudhole
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Awesome!!! Do you mind if I post this in my xanga? lol I found two good poems so far. :D

Nope! I don't care.
Hah, I'm flattered! XD
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