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curi0usbr0wneyes
Alone.
Always Alone.
Doesn't get angry.
Or sad.
Or happy.

Just sits there.
Maybe thinking.
Maybe Lost in another world.
But never in reality.

Doesn't look.
But always sees.
Never misses a thing.

Full of secrets.
Doesn't talk.
Doesn't confide.
So full of secrets.

Made fun of.
But doesn't care.

People ask.
People say.
People command.
But doesn't answer.

Quiet.
Desolate.
Emotionless.

Nothing is ever said.
But there's a connection.

They criticize.
They point.
They shout.
But never answers.

Things happen.
Doesn't look.
But always sees.
Never misses a thing.
vietspirit
cool poem. you got talent.
inquisitive_
That's a pretty good poem. wink.gif I like!
curi0usbr0wneyes
thanx! happy.gif
Foolish Heart
I get the point of your story, i love it. Good job!
xtremeliquid
Nice.
seriouslynikki
man...ur very talented. I love this poem because its like me. Im alone. And this poem TOTALLY relates to me......:(
curi0usbr0wneyes
i thought that i was the only one who felt this way (and of course, i wasnt)...but im glad u guys can relate to my story and im also glad that u like it!
chica777708
I love it, it relates to me to I always think I am alone... good job _smile.gif
curi0usbr0wneyes
Thanx!
Devastation
QUOTE(curi0usbr0wneyes @ Jul 29 2004, 1:32 PM)
Thanx!

i love this poem, alot of feeling and emotion into it, i as well relate to it. Hope you could write more, i love this type of poetry. aim me tehcookieman <3.
01-supergirl
Wow. thats a nice poem...nice work =)
curi0usbr0wneyes
thanx! biggrin.gif
Hells_Ice
i likeey!
emptyminded
I feel with that poem. You are really talented.
curi0usbr0wneyes
WOW! thanks! biggrin.gif happy.gif
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