curi0usbr0wneyes
Jul 26 2004, 04:06 PM
Alone.
Always Alone.
Doesn't get angry.
Or sad.
Or happy.
Just sits there.
Maybe thinking.
Maybe Lost in another world.
But never in reality.
Doesn't look.
But always sees.
Never misses a thing.
Full of secrets.
Doesn't talk.
Doesn't confide.
So full of secrets.
Made fun of.
But doesn't care.
People ask.
People say.
People command.
But doesn't answer.
Quiet.
Desolate.
Emotionless.
Nothing is ever said.
But there's a connection.
They criticize.
They point.
They shout.
But never answers.
Things happen.
Doesn't look.
But always sees.
Never misses a thing.
vietspirit
Jul 26 2004, 04:09 PM
cool poem. you got talent.
inquisitive_
Jul 26 2004, 04:09 PM
That's a pretty good poem.

I like!
curi0usbr0wneyes
Jul 26 2004, 04:15 PM
thanx!
Foolish Heart
Jul 28 2004, 05:44 AM
I get the point of your story, i love it. Good job!
xtremeliquid
Jul 28 2004, 09:14 AM
Nice.
seriouslynikki
Jul 28 2004, 01:10 PM
man...ur very talented. I love this poem because its like me. Im alone. And this poem TOTALLY relates to me......:(
curi0usbr0wneyes
Jul 28 2004, 09:24 PM
i thought that i was the only one who felt this way (and of course, i wasnt)...but im glad u guys can relate to my story and im also glad that u like it!
chica777708
Jul 28 2004, 09:49 PM
I love it, it relates to me to I always think I am alone... good job
curi0usbr0wneyes
Jul 29 2004, 01:32 PM
Thanx!
Devastation
Jul 29 2004, 01:42 PM
QUOTE(curi0usbr0wneyes @ Jul 29 2004, 1:32 PM)
Thanx!
i love this poem, alot of feeling and emotion into it, i as well relate to it. Hope you could write more, i love this type of poetry. aim me tehcookieman <3.
01-supergirl
Jul 29 2004, 02:30 PM
Wow. thats a nice poem...nice work =)
curi0usbr0wneyes
Jul 29 2004, 06:53 PM
thanx!
Hells_Ice
Jul 30 2004, 11:00 AM
i likeey!
emptyminded
Jul 30 2004, 12:11 PM
I feel with that poem. You are really talented.
curi0usbr0wneyes
Jul 30 2004, 12:34 PM
WOW! thanks!
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