i was inspired to write somthing. i saw maia_dc's picture. she's really pretty. so i just started writing things that are good about love and girls and all that jazz, then i was reminded of my one ex who i feel very betrayed by (the transiton is vary appearent) and miss about now, for some reason.

BEAUTY'S HIDDEN AGENDA
An elusive being
A creature of my dreams
To bless wherever she may be
With her majesty
An enchanted smile
Lit the chapel aisle
Made the old feel young
And constrict their lungs
For here mere caress
Made the average chest
Hold a heart that would pound
A tremendous sound
Like the wrath of god
Prestissimo
The glowing goddess
Light be shown

Her eyes: benign
contact with mine
Her skin so smooth
Her voice could soothe
The most ravenous beast
For it sounds so sweet
How I beg to kiss
Her lips that glisten
As I dread
I’m good as dead
Should she remand
My extended hand
A sweet siren
That sings to me
I prey we sleep
In rhapsody

She pulls me nigh
For I embrace
Her golden touch
Angelic grace
Heaven is her
I wish to stay
But misery
Reclaims their place
Inside my being
My tattered soul
Her façade hides
A demonic goal
She betrayed me
Catastrophically
I live to tell
My trip through hell

The phantasm takes form of flesh
Begin the end the day we met
Now all there is is a blood clot
In place of where I kept my heart
The coldest corpse that walks the lane
No stronghold dungeon could restrain
My vindictiveness for your foul act
Prepare for fourty thousand whacks

Wow you are indeed describing a beauty.

Bravo. Well Done. You Rock.

I like the title. Haha I want someone to write a poem like that for me!

dangg, your so good at writing!! you rock!

did you read the last part of it? it turns bad!

thanks, btw!