i know yeah, im so slow i didnt see the edit button till like today lol, sorry :( lol

Whoa...
That's really sad, but really good.

Aww! I really like it. If you have personal experience with some of those feelings I'm sorry... I know what you mean but from the girl's side. Awesome that you can share feelings. Kudos

well thanks for reading it :)

Yeah, I read this when you first posted it..

This was great..

REALLY describes the male's point of view, I can relate to almost all of it, except for getting cheated on/getting hit by a vehicle (well I got hit by a vehicle before, but still.. )

=P

nice job

one word...deep...touching...okay that was two words. oh well. that story was pretty good...i liked it, it seemed very realistic- i jus hope that this isnt based on a true story or anything

Wow thats reeely good

whoa you are a good writer. that was such a touching story.

sux? no way! it was hella good! touchin...

thanks :)

wat evbwun sai its a good story..it is realliee

Wow, I love it!!

This is just like my life, cheesy as it sounds. I cried over this guy, spent alot of money on him and all that.. but he has a girlfriend all the way across the country.. *sigh*

O well, this isnt about me so.. good job!! :)

It gaves me the chills. :D

Interesting, I love it! *claps*

very well written. truly captured the feeling of having a broken heart.

wow, that's realLy deep . . made tears come to my eyes =) goodjob keep it up!!

i hope you don't mind, but i put a link on my xanger that goes to this page =)

i loved it!! great job.. almost made me cry too..

x3

Don't cry because it's over, stare blankly and think "WHAT THE HELL?" because it happened.

thanks for all the great comments