Aug 28 2010, 09:20 PM
So a friend of my family asked if I wouldn't mind doing the invites for her kids birthday party, and since this is one of the very few kids I don't hate I said sure.
Her last name isn't snow face. I just call her that (her parents are Mexican/black and she's a snow face. I also sometimes call her commie because she is adopted from Russia) and I didn't want to post her last name lulz
They gave me a photo to reference of her dressed as a fairy, and that's how she is standing in the photo but I might bring her hands upfront because they kind are bugging me.
Most likely will redo the feet too.
Aug 28 2010, 09:34 PM
It looks really cute and awesome
Aug 28 2010, 10:56 PM
That's so precious!
I'm not sure about the eyes and the center of the flowers, though. Everything else is super soft and those parts are really dark. The feet and hands look fine to me.
Aug 29 2010, 01:45 AM
made the eyes/flowers a little lighter. Also made the dress less poofy
Aug 29 2010, 03:58 AM
Her feet look like hoofs... I agree with the hands being brought to the front, at least make it look like she wants to welcome her guests. There should be a comma after Saturday. Kern the spacing for 2p and 7p, they should be the same. If you put periods in one acronym you should put them in the other, "R.S.V.P.". If this is gonna be printed, be sure to make your background lighter. Rockwell is a fine typeface for the project, Personally I would pick museo
Aug 29 2010, 09:53 PM
Aug 29 2010, 10:02 PM
i'd go to this goddamn party even if there wasn't weed and alcohol naw mean
Aug 29 2010, 10:05 PM
The parents are black and hispanic. Of course there's going to be weed and beer.
The kid will end up with at least 3 dime bags by the end of the night
Aug 29 2010, 10:07 PM
man hispanic & black if they had any biological kids they'd be too lazy to steal
Aug 29 2010, 10:07 PM
well i hope that address is real cause i'm crashing this mother f*cker
Aug 29 2010, 10:34 PM
It looks pretty nice. I'm not too sure about the green, though. It feels a bit too of an "icky" green rather than a soft green.
Also, you should be ashamed. Look what you've just openly given to Tung.
Aug 30 2010, 03:04 PM
Looks cute. The beige colours blend in with the green a little too much, imo.
Aug 30 2010, 04:27 PM
This is so freaking cute! jfsdbfknbdjf. I agree with Gabrielle though.
Aug 30 2010, 07:41 PM
Aug 30 2010, 07:48 PM
Haha, you didn't want to put her last name, but was totally alright with revealing her address?
I think it's absolutely adorable! I would have loved an invitation like this as a kid. The change to blue was a good choice... I think it fits the whole fairy thing more than the green.
Aug 30 2010, 08:06 PM
ahaha. I just typed in random stuff for the address. Thanks
Aug 30 2010, 08:40 PM
lol yeah i saw that 1337 ness
Aug 30 2010, 11:50 PM
Aug 31 2010, 12:46 AM
Cute~ The original was pretty good to begin with, and the final edit is great. I like the shade of blue you picked for the background.
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