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ilovesoup
This is a real story from my friend... and he's actually a writer..
i thought i'd post it here..
Well have fun reading..

I have a great story to tell... I mean this is true... For my purpose, I'm naming my girl, Nicole... She's plain... Has a morena tone, brown eyes, good height... Fit body figure and Brownish Black hair... She's a typical Filipina in an Elite look... Confident. Intelligent. Wholesome. My Type. Nicole is well-rounded. A Lady material who could carry herself out always. She converses well with all kinds of people.



She's sweet, and I learned to love her. At first, we just knew each other. And I'm a bit intimidated with her. She's a born leader. She stands better than I do. But time told me,how feminish she is. She is not that tough... She fears many things... roaches,mascots,spiders and swimming. She's not at all iron... I know...She needs me... Courage slowly consolidated in my heart, and I was able to say it... I told her, what I felt one day... With all my heart--I love her...

She laughed. She ignored. And I knew it. She's a type of girl, who sees to it to carry herself in such a cornering situation. My heart pounded. I didn't know what to do then. And finally she spoke: "We are Friends...Ok?...Just Friends!". I didn't take those words to end what I feel. I pursued. All in the sake of Friendship.

But she's firm... Every little thing she does, speaks of JUST friendship... I'm convinced... I was convinced... She meant it... We are just friends. I retold her again...I want it more... She smiled...Saying: "Friends?". I GIVE UP! It was long. I'm still young. I cried. She smiles.

After ten years...We met again...I now have a new girl... Mia... She's different. Far different from Nicole. She's her opposite. And I now love Mia. I still have all the chances talking to Nicole. We had this special conversation.

Out of curiousity, I asked her:"Why until now you still don't have a boyfriend?" She answered. She whispered to me: "Can you keep a secret?" I eagerly said "Yes!"

And she went: "I don't want other guys to know about this... You know what? I am looking for someone who will completely be patient waiting for me. That everytime I will say we're friends... He will strive more to be my friend. That every thing I do to let him feel my firmness to friendship, would never let go of his true feelings but instead, let me feel his being true. I am looking for someone who wouldn't please me, but show me who he really is. And someone who'll finally realize that I took the friendship thing to know him fully. And that he'll knew I lied all the while, telling him WE have no chance...And it's impossible for US to be one... Because, this someone would just be witty enough to tell me: I want to end our Friendship and kiss me under the sunset..."

I heard it. And I cried. I am a Fool. That must have been what I did. But I stopped...I got hopeless. I was INSENSITIVE. I wanted US easy...And I was wrong. I REALIZED...

I love her still... I love her so much...

I can never forget all my sweet whispers to her. That I just THREW under the Sunset we both dreamt! Why only now? Now that I finally thought of good strategies having her with me f-o-r-e-v-e-r.

Now that I knew, she's a typical lady. Now that I'm married to Mia.
sheepy
its okay. . not dat sad thoo..
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