I just made this today, thoughts?
http://matt-lanter.org/mw.png

His coloring doesn't match the color scheme. I would stay away from red and black. The combo can look super good sometimes, but it usually looks tacky.

I'm not really loving the gradients or the ghost hands either.

All I did was darken him because it was to bright.
Also do you have any suggestions I could use instead of the red?

It doesn't matter whether you did the coloring or it was just like that. The photo is generally blue/orange/saturated-looking which doesn't look great with black and red. You should use navy and instead of black and go from there with the other colors.

I would do colours that match the tone of the guy more.

I'm just gonna scrap this and start over.

I'm not really liking the font choices. I feel they don't complement each other.

I don't know if you're still keeping the design, but keep in mind for future designs to take care when you're cutting out an image with hair. I still see some grey and beige from whatever image you cut him out from and it's distracting me from concentrating on the rest of the layout.

I don't see any things to be really significant. The layout looks so much the same like the other layout you showed us. My comment is going to be the same response from the other thread. But, I'm guessing you don't read my feedback anyways.

Just take a look, it looks so clear that the backend and the ppl does not match. I don't know much about PS, but you might spend one or two hours on this, i bet.