Jun 5 2010, 10:26 AM
No offense, but it's kindof bad
Too blurry the concept is messy and just not clean
Jun 5 2010, 09:41 PM
Well, if you want ideas, then I suggest you do photo shoots that you personally like. You could always try natural beauty shots, profile angle shots, dramatic poses (if you know how to use your body and angles well), etc.
If you want critique like the others gave, I'd work more on quality of the image and try not to over exposure yourself.