this is some photo manipulation things i have been working with let me know whatcha think. C and C would be awesome! oh beeteedumbs the the picture is a thumb-nail.

This is a good example of how to keep images from being too saturated or overexposed.
Looks very natural. There's not much to critique on it, but I wouldn't call this a photo manipulation. It's more of a makeover?

yess it is more of a make-over. and thank you! :D

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heres another thing i made C and C would be glorious. oh and thumbnail once again.

I agree that this is a pretty good retouch, but why did you remove her freckles? I think freckles are cute; they're not a flaw like acne is.

oh well thats me and i don't like my freckles to much so i decided they could leave. haha.

Uh..your second image looks okay. The only thing that stood out to me was the pretty text. Not much of a fan of the textured orange sky.