Rachel
Jul 18 2004, 04:09 PM
keep in mind it was a. 1:30AM and b. i havent written in a lonnnng time
Untitled 7/17/04
Don't you see what your doing to me
Can't you sense how much I care?
I feel that sometimes you don't know me
How the hell is this fair?
Why did I allow myself
To let you affect me the way you do?
I told myself not care this much
But instead I fell in love with you.
Theres just something about you,
It could be how you look at me.
Or maybe how we can talk for hours
How you make me feel free.
I can't believe I'm saying this,
For the first time I think it's true.
I just need to say it,
That I'm in love with you.
chaotic_kitt
Jul 24 2004, 01:53 AM
omg this really fits how i feel now.. its really gd ^^;;
ryfitaDF
Jul 24 2004, 02:27 AM
aaw man. that sucks. that you're saying "i love you" even though he's a jerk.
it's a good poem, though. it's very nice.
iheartsimba
Jul 24 2004, 09:29 AM
nice poem! when i read it, it reminded me of something or smeone....
bibliomania
Jul 24 2004, 05:32 PM
It's lovely. I love the last stanza.
Rachel
Jul 27 2004, 06:57 PM
thanks for your comments guys =) im glad you like it
01-supergirl
Jul 28 2004, 03:29 AM
WOW. thats awsome, kinda reminds me of myself. wonderful girl =]
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