Sa-Chan
Jul 16 2004, 09:45 PM
I Can't
By: Savannah
I can't be your heart,
And I can't stand us always being apart.
All I can do now is close my eyes,
Hoping for the day that I might die.
I no longer see your face,
It's hidden, as if wrapped away in silver lace.
I won't look into the mirror,
Because I no longer wish to see my eyes filled with terror.
I can't be your life,
I'm sorry dear; I'm to busy, I can't put down the knife,
Today can't you be mine?
Just once; just for a moment; just this one, small time?
Foolish Heart
Jul 18 2004, 02:38 AM
OMG IT RHYMED!! LOL..IM A WRITER MYSELF TOO..BUT I CAN NEVER RHYME THE WHOLE POEM!! LOL GOOD JOB..LOVIN THE WHOLE THING!!
01-supergirl
Jul 18 2004, 03:57 AM
Its damn good, great job!
Sa-Chan
Jul 18 2004, 11:19 AM
Thanks to you both! ^^ I'm glad you both liked it! And foolish heart, I was so proud that I rhymed it all. lol.
JlIaTMK
Jul 18 2004, 01:36 PM
nice poem.... really like it
_WillSkate4Shoes
Jul 18 2004, 02:01 PM
Dayng, Talent! haha it takes me forever to make it all rhyme.
truluvis4eva
Jul 19 2004, 05:17 PM
lucky butthead rhymer
bibliomania
Jul 21 2004, 02:43 PM
Rhymes perfectly! I envy you.
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