Sorry, this poem really sucks, I even tried singing it as a song. I dunno, it's like I had two ideas in my head and tried to join them together. It didn't really work out all that well.


Fall Away From Me
By: Savannah


I wouldn't mind if you told me,
I was your everything, your only.
If you said that you loved me,
I swear I'd break free from this frame.
I swear that for you I could feel,
And for you...one day I could be real.

If you wanted me to be,
I'd become your fairy-tale princess,
I would steal your heart away,
I would be your April rains,
And the flowers in May.
Just tell me that I'm yours...

And for you I would be sweet,
And I would be kind, I would never sin.
For you I'd be anything, I'd be everything,
Is it true that you think I'm your world?
I'm your life, and I'm important?
Please...don't say that, I can't replace your universe.

I wish I could, I wish I could be everything for you,
I'd love to make you happy, and make you smile.
If I said I could change, I'd be lying.
So, the best thing I can do for you now,
The only thing I can think to do...
Is set you free.

I'm sorry I can't be real,
I'm sorry I can't be the pretty princess,
That you wish I could be.
I can't be your universe, and I can't be your love.
I can't break free from the frame that holds me.
In the end, I have to ask you to...

Forget me; leave me behind,
Neglect my feelings for you.
Omit my memories of you.
Overlook that kiss we shared that day,
It's all become so far away...
Fall away from me...

It sucks? You must remember that your standards are far higher than ours..

I think its great..

For a song.. I can see parts of it working, but I would agree that the song part needs refinement..

that is a good poem, it really shows the main point that the author is trying to show others...

kutos to you for trying to make it into a song, i agree with EmeraldKnight, when it comes to song part, it does need some "refinement".....but hey, it doesnt hurt to try, eh?

LaterZ

-Courtney