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smallymollyLINDA

Jul 14 2004, 10:18 PM

I love you I love you,
I love you so well,
if I had a skunk
I would give you a smell.
If I were a dog
I would give you a bite.
If I were a witch
I would give you a fright.

If I were a bathtub
I'd give you a splash.
If I were a fungus
I'd give you a rash.

I love you so much
that I won't tell a lie,
I promise we'll marry
the day that I die.

Linda

Caitlin

Jul 14 2004, 10:20 PM

woah very creative.. i like it ;P good job

LiNHy POO

Jul 15 2004, 12:43 AM

sooo cute!!! rhymes nicely!!

hybrid

Jul 15 2004, 01:03 AM

QUOTE(smallymollyLINDA @ Jul 14 2004, 11:18 PM)

I love you so much
that I won't tell a lie,
I promise we'll marry
the day that I die.

^^ That is so deep.

kraziegrl

Jul 15 2004, 01:42 AM

QUOTE(smallymollyLINDA @ Jul 14 2004, 10:18 PM)

I promise we'll marry
the day that I die.

Linda

i like this poem

but.. im a little confused on soemthing. why is she/he going to marry someone the day that they die?

sh0rt13

Jul 15 2004, 01:24 PM

i like that..very cute!

_WillSkate4Shoes

Jul 15 2004, 11:12 PM

That was really cute! hehe and creative! i like it!

eboarder2020

Jul 16 2004, 10:35 AM

thats a great poem... It flows well and is very emotional... Good JOb

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