redsoxbaby87
Jul 14 2004, 03:26 PM
too vast
too far
i am not your shooting star
i am too far
do not wish upon me
i will not hear you
your wish will fall upon deaf ears
it will float for eternity
falling upon deadend ears
forever
and ever
and ever
i am not your shooting star
but by no means
am i telling you not to try
i am just telling you what will happen
so feel free
to send your message out into the universe
out to me
silver-rain
Jul 14 2004, 03:39 PM
wow, that's really good. hmm, i wish i could write like as well as you.
EmeraldKnight
Jul 14 2004, 03:48 PM

*is speechless*
QUOTE
wow, that's really good. hmm, i wish i could write like as well as you.
^ what she said
redsoxbaby87
Jul 14 2004, 06:37 PM
oh thanks! that is so sweet but really i suck.
Caitlin
Jul 14 2004, 06:56 PM
^ you dont suck at all that was amazing! <3 keep up the good work
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