I'm so alone there's no one here
I clos emy eyes and disappear
My world goes quiet and fades to black
It is too late I can't go back
I remember all those nights alone
Stayed up late sitting by the phone
All I wanted was just one call
Too bad it never came at all
Will anyone notice that I'm gone?
Is what I have done really so wrong?
I couldn't deal with all the pain
Another would have drove me insane

Crud I screwed up..........


***Another DAY would have drove me insane.


I can't type at all. My apologies.

thats g0oOd! ;] u got talentt!! keep on writingg!

man...ur gifted!!!!! I love this poem!!! It relates to me and my life!

thats good. Can be related too in some ways for me but yea. its good. Keep writing. everyone likes reading.

Wow that's depressing.. very well written too.. I think we can all relate to that in some way..

....its like you know me...

-Phil-

good job !! i reallly like your work...keep it comin

thats pretty good. next time if u made a mistake, u can just edit ur post.

wow. you're really good at writing poems. keep it up!

You should read The Phone Call by Dorothy Parker.

Nice poem! Good work. Don't worry about the typos... you can fix it! :-D

o wow i dink its really good nd deep

Great poem! You've got talent so use it.

wow so much talent
i cud neva do stuff like that
good job!!

Says it all!

thats good