I ran out of things to add that are Fall-ish. I am procrastinating on the leaves for the tree because I have a feeling it's going to be incredibly monotonous. yeah. It's sad how long I worked o this and there's barely anything there.

Ideas and criticism plz.

monotonous

Thank you

something about the orangy color of the tree with the orange of the sky feels weird to me.


YOU NEED A SQUIRREL


it looks pretty good over all though, good job. i like the scarecrow and stuff in the back a lot.

That squirrel was harder then it looks mister mister.

Idk about the tree, I might try a dark red instead.

that's the best squirrel i've ever seen. this will probably be the most popular layout you've ever made because of it. you can thank me later for this.



idk about the tree either. i like it better, but now i kinda don't like the color with the grass. the two different hues are looking awkward to me just like the two oranges did.

uhh...leaves on the ground or a rake? Maybe even some little kids in costumes in the background? Idk, looks pretty good to me though. Yeah, try a reddish color for the tree.

I am pretty content with the tree color.

yeah i think that looks a lot better.

The sun is... not perfectly circle? I would try branching out the tree a bit more than just a cloud of leaves on top of the trunk. Some details for bark would be nice too. A kid resting against the trunk with a bag of candies cause he/she just finished trick or treating?

Guys playing football in the background. Some details in the grass. Oh and the fence extended through to the edge of the picture. Ending it before the picture breaks just makes it look isolated, like there's only that and nothing off to the side of it. A farm or barnyard silhouette in the background might help too? Oh and of course leaves floating through the sky, and perhaps more trees if you want that.

You can go over the cards I did for the fall for inspiration. I thought long and hard about what events happen in the fall haha.

oooh. i like :)
the squirrel did make a difference. haha

Oh wow I liked the edits as I kept scrolling down. I think the colors look great; they give off that "fall" vibe. It looks really cute, Abbey.

I think this will turn out well. The owl and mushrooms are cute.

lol thanks guys. The scarecrow is my fave part so far.


I just went ahead a little and tried to work out what the rollovers will be. The squirrel is a bit mental rite now.

Haha I like this one better.

lol@the squirrel rollover.

wow i really like the progression. keep up the good work abbey!