i would accept the place where i belong...
if only you were here...
because i can see so clear...
what you say to me...
i would sit outside your window,
for all eternity.
if i could.
and your words, when you
sing to me...
all i hear is what you
say.
in the breaths between.

if only you could see what i mean.
but you don't know me.
all you do is sing.
but i hear what you say to me
i hear,
the words between...

its lame i know

no it's not lame. to be honest, it was ok, but lil bit weird...hehe so ur poem is telling us that u dont know him, but u see him outside ur window...and hes just singing but u can still feel his breath? hehe i hope that's wat ur talking bot

its about me stalking a rockstar lol!

ROCKSTAR BABY! hehes, don't think your things are lamee, they aren't. Really =)

hmmm its good.... but different